Descrition Class

Kuran waited for dead to come.

dead walked in and saw kuran waiting for him

"Ok...i know you only do short posts...so this owuld help you to make better post if your willing to put the work in...", he gave a grinned as he cough.

"Ok first...lets rp in the woods...if you arrived there how you post...", he sat down.

dead walked into the woods the morning dew was on the leafs the wind was crisp and cool and blowing to the west he sat down in the middle of this lushes forest and smelled the flowers

dead walked into the woods the morning dew was on the leafs the wind was crisp and cool and blowing to the west he sat down in the middle of this lushes forest and smelled the flowers

That was good...but if you make it abit long like:

Dead walked slowly into the woods, he was tired because he got up in the peak of morning, the sun was shinning but it was very very dim, the morning dew was on the leafs the wind was crisp and cool and blowing to the west, he walked as he looked around the empty woods the birds flew around every now and then making those same bird noise, he sat down in the middle of this lushes forest and smelled the flowers.

When you rp....you explain everything...in detail...

• Trees
  
• Grass
  
• Wind
  
• Sun
  
• Animals
  
• You - Emotions, thoughs etc....

dead had walked into a lushes forest the dew was on the leaves the grass was wet from the rain fall the night before he was tired and hungry he was breathing hard the sun was out now and was bright the wind was crisp and cool and blowing to the north there is a lake to the west he went to the lake and sat down he smelled the flowers scent around the lake and closed his eye's and fell asleep

"Much better...now ill join you....next part of this class...is to rp at that stage but with other people....", he stood then coughed,

Rp:

Sasuke was on his normal walk like what he always does, this time he took a diffrent route, the sun was very faint as it felt like it was just rising, he could sense a person near him, maybe it was time to eat so he quicken his pace, he eyes shone red as his pupils went small, he jumped on the tree branch and flipped himself, beacuse he was good at that, it was a vampire thing. In the distance he saw a person sleeping, he made a drop visit, "Hello...there...why sleep outside...hmm..?", sasuke watch the person to see how they would react to him.

OCC: Rp like before...see how i did it...the way i talked...and the commas and so on...ill check when your finished.

Dead had waken up at this point and saw the vampire king looking at him oh look at this royal scum.he said as he stood up and looked at the vampire king now what do you want.he said as he got ready for a fight